Written verse about some BS with an ex…check it out and let me know what you think!!!?
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There comes a time in your life
When you gotta move on
Forget the bull shit
Move on to the next one
Cuz its not worth wasting my energy
Thinkin bout you, when its plain to see
That you aren’t for me, what the fuck do you want from me?
Always callin me and seein if i wanna hang out
Wassup with your new man, you havin a drought?
Hasn’t rained in awhile, so you startin to pout
Well I aint fuckin with you no more, time to find a new route
A new destination, many new relations
Maybe go to south america, call it immigration
To get segregation from you and your lyin ways
Hidin from you in the shade, ‘way from the sun rays
As i graze, doin nothin but chillin
Went to Canada this past week, traded all my bills in
For a lil foreign currency
Had fun, got drunk, I could barely see
Snagged that garter right off her L-E-G
What happened after that is a mystery to me AND…
(Chorus)
All i gotta say to you is this
Surely theres things i miss
But for the most part i don’t
Really give a shit
I guess the reason for this song is to show you you were wrong
I may have broke it off, but it was your fault all along
You went behind my back, time and time again
Number 1 was a mistake, the rest were all sins
Cuz you shudda known better, then to fuck with me
If you were gonna cheat again, why you ever come back to me
And make me think/ that everything was alright
Then we get back together and again we start to fight
thats all i finished just lookin for criticism please!!! idc if you hate it just tell me whats bad and whats good, etc. thanks in advance
yeah this is a rap. its hard to know sometimes and its hard to judge it when you cant hear it cuz at least you can have some flow if your words perfectly rhyme,etc.
well junior, i appreciate your honesty but it is a rap and it sounds like a rap when i rap it. and it rhymes too but they arent all end rhymes i hate using the last word to rhyme in everything its so original. the way a person verbally expresses what they write is the key to everything. but as far as the material i have better ive just already posted them and they got blocked for what reason im not sure